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Here’s a snippet of what i wouldve told him (if i didn’t wanna tell him the topic is too cliche a... 02.07.2024 1:43 ↓

Here’s a snippet of what i wouldve told him (if i didn’t wanna tell him the topic is too cliche and he should re-write the entire thing 😭): There’s a decent foundation here, but we need to amp up the depth and specificity to make your essay truly pop. Your story about overcoming challenges in bowling is inspiring, but it comes off a bit generic and lacks that personal zing that would make it memo...